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Please don't post your beginner's demo crap in here. You can at least make this not buggy. If you need help to debug this broken demo, post in the forums, where people with a lot experience can help you.
This is really good!!!
You should add sound effects and a speed up button.
I reckon you need much better mastering.
Dance music has much more post-processing than than your other average stuff.
First of all. Your two melodies are in the the same frequencies, making it really hard to listen both at the same time.
Next, your drums seem to be nice and punchy, but again they are still in the high frequencies, which sounds alright, but push the melodies into to the shadows.
But mainly, your Compression and EQ was a real let down. You had almost no bass, which is crap for dance music.
Even in less than a minute, can make this sound much better.
^^^ That is your track with a light touch of compression and reverb, applied by me in Adobe Audition in less than 2 mins and IMO sounds much better.
Will definitely sound better on shitty speakers/headphones.
Concluding, you should read up on stuff about mastering.
I do not have a computer still, so I had to use a basic program, which involves no mastering, to make this track. I also had to lower the sound quality to get this to fit the required size because the original render was a huge file (which is also why I only uploaded the 1:32 long version). My headphones have a lot of bass, and a super heavy bassed song wasn't really what I was going for, so I could understand someone whos headphones don't have as much bass, not really enjoying this to a full effect.
Also, I would more or less qualify this as electro, but since there is no electro section and my friend immediately started dancing when he heard this, I put it in the Dance portal.
But yeah I will definately take your advise on mastering. I don't really know a whole lot about it, so I'm probably going to read some tips, and watch some youtube videos. And I might even re-upload a remastered version of this song later on down the road.
Thanks for the review. Good criticism is always appreciated ;)
Very good. If this is Dubstep then you have to boost the beats. The snare and the kick should have polarity like twins - one evil, one good. The beat needs to be more significant and in yo' face.
The wobble bass atm eclipses everything else. It is pretty good, but you probs need a countermelody to balance it out. The intro and outro was nice. That is all.
Sounds Awesome. I really like the background arp.
you're AWESOME :)
It's hard to differentiate between the alien tentacles and the space suit tubes...
Or have two tentacles speared through her and came out of her titties?
Oh damn, I didn't ever notice that.
SH!T... aww damn thanks for telling me that man, haha. I'll be sure to fix that.
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